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 Elle a perdu la vie
Dans l’histoire d’amour
Elle a perdu l’intention
Dans sa vie
Elle a perdu l ’amour dans
Pour le moment
Elle avait dйsolй
Elle a voulu retourner
Mais il n’a pas voulu
Aprиs il se change d’avis
Elle est venue а la fenкtre
Il lui a regardй
Il a voulu parler
Elle a vu la rue
Il a hurlй
Mais elle a sautй
Dans l’obscuritй
C’etait le fin
Il a pleurй
 

 My first song in English:
"All alone now"

I'm so alone....
but I don't feel bad.
I'm simply walking,
that looks sad.
I walk alone,
nothing else to do.
I'm going down the street
but no one can pull me down.
I see my shadow dreams
somewhere here, among the streets.
I'm safe here.
I'm really free,
It's my world,
my life's code.
I like this way,
it doesn't seem grey.
So, i'm happy now
cause I'm alone. How
could you understand me?
But you shouldn't, maybe.
Yeah, I see....
I'm safe here.
I'm really free,
It's my world,
my life's code.
 

 я, бы не смогла...
 

 Sad art thou autumn, a pleasure to the eye!
I love thy farewell beauty.
In splendour witherst thou away,
In gold and purple clad are thy forests,
In wavy haze are clad thy skies,
Fresh is thy wind as whisperst softly thou.
I love the rare ray of sun,
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I need your help.

Refrain:

It's so hard to see
The tears of my innocent angel.
Just stay with me,
You're my fire and ice.
But if you want
To go - I let you, I'll change all.
Though I miss those flashes
In your loving eyes.

When you smile
It is like golden sunshine.
Tell me why
Are you sure that I'm fine?
When you are so far
I lose myself,
And I can't understand,
I need your help.
 

 Max Idunno, "My English poetry:
Just walk away"

Здорово! Так красиво..мне понравилось!!!!
 

 Oh, this brilliant play, this eternal love,
Its so bright, so sincere, and so deep!
We can meet it so seldom in our life,
Its a dream, its a romantic sleep!
You just saw in your fancy her beautiful face,
Her eyes, her lips all her image
And you cannot sleep, and you lose your rest,
You get blind, but dont notice this damage!

 

 Это так, фантазии на тему. У меня есть и песни собственного сочинения на английском, основная тема - фэнтези.
 

 Не слабо. Но - не здесь ( с пометкой: "крайне сокровенно")
 

 Писала стихи на немецком.Но больше от сильной любви к языку,нежели от осознания своего поэтического дара))) Ибо таковым не обладаю.А вот переводы поэтические легче даются,но и их не очень люблю.
 

 Было дело, но получилась какая-то муть:

The silence is here
and nothing’s before
the life does continue
but you don’t believe anymore

and now you’re crazy
without this one
who was always busy
you cry every time

when the night comes in here
with the thousands of stars
this night is your killer…
it says “Bye” and smiles…
 

 Пишу... Профессионалы, оцените))) За ошибки прошу бить не очень сильно))))
 

 ANGE DU SEIGNEUR
Dans cette nuit l`йtoile s`allume.
C`est la belle Lune, qu`йclaire ma plume
Pour vous avouer а cette heure
Que j`aime un ange du Seigneur
Quand je l`йcoute, quand je le vois
Je sens l`amour au fond de moi
Ses yeux, son вme, ils m`ensorcellent
Oh, quelle torture l`amour mortel!
Mais ce beau sens que j`ai pour lui
Ne laissera jamais ma vie
Et je pourrais donner mon cur,
Mes вme et vie pour son bonheur!..
 

 ***
All is finished now: you are fiancй
And my heart has nothing more to say
I have loved you more than all my life
And that news has blessed me like a knife.

You were mine in sweet dreams of my nights,
But there is the one who really fights,
She had took all your heart in her soul,
And now you are hers, you are hers whole…

No, I don’t believe I lose this race
We will talk together, face to face,
I will say you how much I can love,
And let it all hear the Lord above!

But I don’t want you to leave your belle.
You know, all this loving I can quell,
‘Cause I want to see your happiness
With heart full of love and tenderness.

Will you be mine one day? I don’t know!
You are fiancй now, for me it’s low.
Oh, I won’t be able dream again,
‘Cause I will not love some other man,

But your happy eyes are all for me
And I wan you really to be free,
Free from tears of world and words of pain,
Which say that the fillings are in vain,

That from us the love supreme may run,
That you have fight for the place on sun…
Nando, since our birth until the death
We are lonely in the light of earth.

Only love can change our destiny,
And it’s only one so saint for me!
So I wish you a life full of love.
If she is your only lovely dove,

I wish you and her the sweetest days,
Passions nights and many happy ways.
You are in my heart, my love is pure,
And I care of you more, more, more, more…

Hear my words, oh my dear, this blue night!
I know, now you need the supreme light.
God will be with you, I pray tonight,
He will save you; He’ll be on your side!

And me… I will hide my silent tears
And I’ll wait for you through all the years.
It is too hard see you are fiancй,
But did really finish all today?..
 

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